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Oh, Romeo. Could thy be lost in depths of tar, so deep, your embrace is far from clearance of air your Sadness, by thou’s lost mourning and debt of heart must not be determinant of thee’s lost wish to depart
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May 11, 2014
May 11, 2014 at 9:46 PM UTC
R&J
Oh, Romeo. Could thy be lost in depths of tar, so deep, your embrace is far from clearance of air your Sadness, by thou’s lost mourning and debt of heart must not be determinant of thee’s lost wish to depart
Could someone tell me if it's properly written in iambic pentameter?
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May 11, 2014
May 11, 2014 at 9:46 PM UTC
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