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There’s a crevice in my heart, along with an exhausted smile, Hiding in the darkness, and when no-one sees, it weeps. Then you come along, silently, yet it trembles my world. My heart was breathin’ so lonely, now I know this emptiness can’t be fulfilled. And I stop hatin’, right at the very moment you look into my eyes. That’s when I realize, you can’t have a broken heart without believing in Love. Time Passes by, Beauty Changes, Love Faded, and People Die – You’ll always end up being Alone. I think you should love me.
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Jul 26, 2010
Jul 26, 2010 at 6:02 AM UTC
I Think You Should Love Me
There’s a crevice in my heart, along with an exhausted smile, Hiding in the darkness, and when no-one sees, it weeps. Then you come along, silently, yet it trembles my world. My heart was breathin’ so lonely, now I know this emptiness can’t be fulfilled. And I stop hatin’, right at the very moment you look into my eyes. That’s when I realize, you can’t have a broken heart without believing in Love. Time Passes by, Beauty Changes, Love Faded, and People Die – You’ll always end up being Alone. I think you should love me.
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erica-c
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Jul 26, 2010
Jul 26, 2010 at 6:02 AM UTC
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