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Loving

I fell in love

down by the shore,

where the water was sweet,

and the air even more.

 

A field of sunflowers

stretched out before us.

You plucked one

and placed it in my hair.

You said I was beautiful,

and I believed you.

 

Lazy days of chain-smoking

and drinking too much

made me melt like butter.

I was lost and now I'm found.

I was alone and now I'm not.

 

I found myself at the end of myself

and forever continue to do so.

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Written by
JoBarb
26 / F
Published
Jul 19, 2018
Lines·Words
17·85
Notes

I stole the ending from a previous poem of mine, but I think that it works better here. Thoughts? It still needs some work, but I think the bones of it may have potential..?

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#love#self#flowers#shore#water#romance#longing#abuse#drugs
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