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her eyes were the ocean: deep and blue, hidden by tears. you tried to help, you asked her "what's wrong?" "nothing, just tired," was what she had said. but despite her words you knew there was more; something deeply hidden in the depths of the ocean, of the saltiness of the gentle sea. there was a battle going on inside of her, tearing at her rib cage, paralyzingly her soul but she wouldn't let you in; her walls were too high. inside she was b r o k e n a powerful sea of emotions, but outside she was s m i l i n g, just what you knew you wanted to see a.m.
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Mar 10, 2013
Mar 10, 2013 at 9:01 PM UTC
Deep Blue Sea
her eyes were the ocean: deep and blue, hidden by tears. you tried to help, you asked her "what's wrong?" "nothing, just tired," was what she had said. but despite her words you knew there was more; something deeply hidden in the depths of the ocean, of the saltiness of the gentle sea. there was a battle going on inside of her, tearing at her rib cage, paralyzingly her soul but she wouldn't let you in; her walls were too high. inside she was b r o k e n a powerful sea of emotions, but outside she was s m i l i n g, just what you knew you wanted to see a.m.
ashley-8
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Mar 10, 2013
Mar 10, 2013 at 9:01 PM UTC
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