Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
You've been hypnotized by the illusion of grandeur the brilliance, and you’re not stopping to think: ...“Maybe I’m worth the truth.” The bloom of youth is stripped from your heart, you’ve lost it, crying on the telephone, no resilience left there’s no one home and you’re naked, bare and devoid of emotion, it’s like a frozen ocean waves cresting up, and you’re down and out you’re cracking, life is not what it should’ve been, expectations would’ve been less if you hadn’t been encouraged by the shiny spawn of those media-machines, flipped through and through ‘til the pages were worn, it’s the system pulling you down. “I’m not good enough,” he sobbed into his hands with the curtains drawn, but you’ve got to push on, and on, and on; can you lose the tragedy, the heavyhearted, sorry semblance of a man you think you should be? It’s sad but true, as much as you try there will always be someone better, better and more fit for the job, the test, the class, the girl, everything but first and foremost you will always know you tried your finest or at least you think you did and feel blessed, and loved by the people who know you best, if you remember that you’re like a grain of sand on the beach, one amongst millions, but still beautiful in your own way just have confidence.
0
Jun 24, 2010
Jun 24, 2010 at 6:08 PM UTC
You're Your Own Worst Critic
You've been hypnotized by the illusion of grandeur the brilliance, and you’re not stopping to think: ...“Maybe I’m worth the truth.” The bloom of youth is stripped from your heart, you’ve lost it, crying on the telephone, no resilience left there’s no one home and you’re naked, bare and devoid of emotion, it’s like a frozen ocean waves cresting up, and you’re down and out you’re cracking, life is not what it should’ve been, expectations would’ve been less if you hadn’t been encouraged by the shiny spawn of those media-machines, flipped through and through ‘til the pages were worn, it’s the system pulling you down. “I’m not good enough,” he sobbed into his hands with the curtains drawn, but you’ve got to push on, and on, and on; can you lose the tragedy, the heavyhearted, sorry semblance of a man you think you should be? It’s sad but true, as much as you try there will always be someone better, better and more fit for the job, the test, the class, the girl, everything but first and foremost you will always know you tried your finest or at least you think you did and feel blessed, and loved by the people who know you best, if you remember that you’re like a grain of sand on the beach, one amongst millions, but still beautiful in your own way just have confidence.
Written by Katrina Kollmann MINE! NOT YOURS! <3
katrina-maria
Written by
Jun 24, 2010
Jun 24, 2010 at 6:08 PM UTC
Request permission to use this poem