Easter Egg is I think it works as is or, you can read the title before each couplet
...did I say that right , as I Look at the last line (do couplets have to rhyme}
I know that solemn is an adjective, and I am being anthropomorphic about the color "white" (its fricking POETRY}
if nights can't be heavy, why is it they can "fall"
And Yes, I did intentionally throw off the rhythm just a little when I could've easily said "longer and heavier nights." It's on porpus lol