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her vibes are quite aesthetic but her mind is rather sick walking the line between happy and sad but shes found that its slick shes fallen a few times broken her back now shes comfortable down there and there's no coming back shes tried to crawl up but they own her now she wants to care but she doesnt know how they all try to save her but she doesnt want saved shes too far gone that she feels ok
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Feb 6, 2019
Feb 6, 2019 at 6:31 PM UTC
theres no coming back| please critique
her vibes are quite aesthetic but her mind is rather sick walking the line between happy and sad but shes found that its slick shes fallen a few times broken her back now shes comfortable down there and there's no coming back shes tried to crawl up but they own her now she wants to care but she doesnt know how they all try to save her but she doesnt want saved shes too far gone that she feels ok
izzy-krompack
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Feb 6, 2019
Feb 6, 2019 at 6:31 PM UTC
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