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Yes i loved girl When i was too young. When,i was naive enough to not believe in rejection. Yes i loved a girl she had black hair like that of the bounty sky. and a pretty face that sometimes looked like it could pry. I belived having a big heart and being just not ugly was enough. but it's one of my assumptions, that always spills over the trough. But now i learnt, love is just a materialistic word. it's not as free and mystic that it once occured. No it was'nt a breakup as the say. It was more of a perfect concoction to ruin your faith and in the end make you sway. No i dont have the perfect lines today to make the edges rhyme. Maybe i lost it somewhere while pondering on whether i commited a crime. Yes i loved a girl, when i was too young. when i belived i could let go and run. Yes i loved a girl, she was honest and stern, but now i hope i would make the pages to turn.
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Mar 11, 2013
Mar 11, 2013 at 8:17 PM UTC
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Yes i loved girl When i was too young. When,i was naive enough to not believe in rejection. Yes i loved a girl she had black hair like that of the bounty sky. and a pretty face that sometimes looked like it could pry. I belived having a big heart and being just not ugly was enough. but it's one of my assumptions, that always spills over the trough. But now i learnt, love is just a materialistic word. it's not as free and mystic that it once occured. No it was'nt a breakup as the say. It was more of a perfect concoction to ruin your faith and in the end make you sway. No i dont have the perfect lines today to make the edges rhyme. Maybe i lost it somewhere while pondering on whether i commited a crime. Yes i loved a girl, when i was too young. when i belived i could let go and run. Yes i loved a girl, she was honest and stern, but now i hope i would make the pages to turn.
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Mar 11, 2013
Mar 11, 2013 at 8:17 PM UTC
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