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Many days passed And now, things seem to be vast. We paint a picture, small and still, But its uncertain, we need a drill. As I lay not dying, Not the book some are reading, I see a vision. I feel something, perhaps, confusion. I lay here, alive. But I see them, attempting to survive. Now once again, life revealed itself to me But still, its God's Grace that reaches humanity. I have it. Unlike them stucked in a pit. Realizing this should not produce grief But be selfless like a stiff.
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Dec 8, 2014
Dec 8, 2014 at 6:58 AM UTC
Suspension
Many days passed And now, things seem to be vast. We paint a picture, small and still, But its uncertain, we need a drill. As I lay not dying, Not the book some are reading, I see a vision. I feel something, perhaps, confusion. I lay here, alive. But I see them, attempting to survive. Now once again, life revealed itself to me But still, its God's Grace that reaches humanity. I have it. Unlike them stucked in a pit. Realizing this should not produce grief But be selfless like a stiff.
Kind of a divergent based poem. Only at the end. Hahaha.
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Dec 8, 2014
Dec 8, 2014 at 6:58 AM UTC
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