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I.  Attributes She's quiet, she smells good People don't notice her She loves like it's something to be guilty for She's willing to let you go In exchange for just a few seconds, Even a passing glance It would be pathetic Except for the tragedy She drips sorrow It's painful to even watch She's elegant, reminds me of silk And expensive lace A whiff of jasmine perfume She's leaking at the edges With unrequited everythings II.  As I Watch You turn away and With your back toward her You don't see or appreciate The fragile smile she assumes for you or how It  breaks In the fall halfway between the floor And her lips. III.  Objections How! Can you be so cruel? You don't even notice her! She's a person! She's more real than you How can you be so inconsiderate? You should be concerned As if your life depended on it! Because hers might And you are stuck So ignorant
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Jan 10, 2011
Jan 10, 2011 at 11:23 AM UTC
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I.  Attributes She's quiet, she smells good People don't notice her She loves like it's something to be guilty for She's willing to let you go In exchange for just a few seconds, Even a passing glance It would be pathetic Except for the tragedy She drips sorrow It's painful to even watch She's elegant, reminds me of silk And expensive lace A whiff of jasmine perfume She's leaking at the edges With unrequited everythings II.  As I Watch You turn away and With your back toward her You don't see or appreciate The fragile smile she assumes for you or how It  breaks In the fall halfway between the floor And her lips. III.  Objections How! Can you be so cruel? You don't even notice her! She's a person! She's more real than you How can you be so inconsiderate? You should be concerned As if your life depended on it! Because hers might And you are stuck So ignorant
antoinette-christensen
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Jan 10, 2011
Jan 10, 2011 at 11:23 AM UTC
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