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When you start something And you never quit When you set a goal And you work towards it When you have a dream But it’s counterfeit When you try so hard And you still fall down When you get back up And you look around So you then realize You’re in the background When your eyes open And you see the lie When you feel so hurt And you want to cry When you be yourself You suddenly fly! Who cares if they hate So filled with critique You make no mistakes Because you’re unique
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May 1, 2017
May 1, 2017 at 11:53 PM UTC
When You Realize
When you start something And you never quit When you set a goal And you work towards it When you have a dream But it’s counterfeit When you try so hard And you still fall down When you get back up And you look around So you then realize You’re in the background When your eyes open And you see the lie When you feel so hurt And you want to cry When you be yourself You suddenly fly! Who cares if they hate So filled with critique You make no mistakes Because you’re unique
I wrote this about a year ago. Originally it was supposed to be a song. Probably one of my best poems so far, though my english teacher had /nothing/ good to say about it.
LizLizzie
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May 1, 2017
May 1, 2017 at 11:53 PM UTC
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