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She finally peaks her head out from her watery love And I watch her breathe in this human air, alllll this fresh air And this I swear, is more then I can bare Seeing her face, eyes, damp and dark from the sea And I wonder what the sun feels like to her against her Pale, flawless skin, this thought made my heart sore for weeks   The color of her blue eyes in the sun, as pretty as the sea Her eyes hold the sea, she is the Goddess of me   The sea has spared me from this, beautiful, scare The sea gave her thoughts of we, she sees me   She is extremely perfect, with faded skin, perfect eyes   With the most lightest blonde hair strands, you have and will ever see I cannot say whether any disease of love of the heart Caused her cheeks, her lips to need the sea But she is the only thing I can see Her eyes once soooo full of the sea, she is lonely She actually misses me, the sea listened to my plea In her heart lives the slightest thought of we I'm sure she lives a lonely life under the sea As I watched her visit me secretly   As I watched her perfectly hidden, I watched her heart changed I saw in her eyes, not only me but the sea can tell That for the first time, her mind thought that the sea Wasn't all she sees, the sea is slowly draining from her eyes I think Her eyes see something in me
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Apr 1, 2015
Apr 1, 2015 at 12:44 PM UTC
The Sea is Leaving
She finally peaks her head out from her watery love And I watch her breathe in this human air, alllll this fresh air And this I swear, is more then I can bare Seeing her face, eyes, damp and dark from the sea And I wonder what the sun feels like to her against her Pale, flawless skin, this thought made my heart sore for weeks   The color of her blue eyes in the sun, as pretty as the sea Her eyes hold the sea, she is the Goddess of me   The sea has spared me from this, beautiful, scare The sea gave her thoughts of we, she sees me   She is extremely perfect, with faded skin, perfect eyes   With the most lightest blonde hair strands, you have and will ever see I cannot say whether any disease of love of the heart Caused her cheeks, her lips to need the sea But she is the only thing I can see Her eyes once soooo full of the sea, she is lonely She actually misses me, the sea listened to my plea In her heart lives the slightest thought of we I'm sure she lives a lonely life under the sea As I watched her visit me secretly   As I watched her perfectly hidden, I watched her heart changed I saw in her eyes, not only me but the sea can tell That for the first time, her mind thought that the sea Wasn't all she sees, the sea is slowly draining from her eyes I think Her eyes see something in me
I added a few lines from a short poem I wrote in here... I just wrote this i didn't check for mistakes so if you see any please let me know... and let me know what you think... and this poem is based off of the poem I already wrote... Its Taken Me... it's kinda like the story after
tana-young
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29/F/American
Apr 1, 2015
Apr 1, 2015 at 12:44 PM UTC
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