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My prettiest words, my sincerest thoughts, the deepest parts of my heart— you had them all. I had eyes only for you. Now I’m blind. I don’t know where I’m going, but I know where I’ve been. I touched your heart for just a moment— and I could breathe. Now I’m blind, hooked to a breathing machine.
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Jun 17, 2025
Jun 17, 2025 at 3:23 PM UTC
Now I'm Blind
My prettiest words, my sincerest thoughts, the deepest parts of my heart— you had them all. I had eyes only for you. Now I’m blind. I don’t know where I’m going, but I know where I’ve been. I touched your heart for just a moment— and I could breathe. Now I’m blind, hooked to a breathing machine.
this came out in one go. some loves feel like breath — until you forget how to breathe without them.
abyss
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25/F/Kosovo
Jun 17, 2025
Jun 17, 2025 at 3:23 PM UTC
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