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1 a.m. and I'm in 2 deep because it's 3 strike outs and 4 the first time it's 5 times harder than I ever expected when 1 time it all seemed 2 good to be true hearing those 3 words that were 4 me and only me but 5 thousand times apparently loses luster, still I miss the 1 love that brought us 2 gether for those long 3 years going strong 4 each other but 5 months was much too long to wait without 1 last chance 2 make everything 3 hundred times better than ever be- 4 I now would have to drive 5 hours just to look you in the eyes instead of 6 minutes through the old neighborhood to 7 Valleywood Drive where we 8 tortellini in the rain and by 9 p.m. each night we've already forgot- 10 the demons of the day in each others arms
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Sep 11, 2014
Sep 11, 2014 at 9:27 PM UTC
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1 a.m. and I'm in 2 deep because it's 3 strike outs and 4 the first time it's 5 times harder than I ever expected when 1 time it all seemed 2 good to be true hearing those 3 words that were 4 me and only me but 5 thousand times apparently loses luster, still I miss the 1 love that brought us 2 gether for those long 3 years going strong 4 each other but 5 months was much too long to wait without 1 last chance 2 make everything 3 hundred times better than ever be- 4 I now would have to drive 5 hours just to look you in the eyes instead of 6 minutes through the old neighborhood to 7 Valleywood Drive where we 8 tortellini in the rain and by 9 p.m. each night we've already forgot- 10 the demons of the day in each others arms
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Sep 11, 2014
Sep 11, 2014 at 9:27 PM UTC
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