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It was a long long ride To Carrollton, Georgia From Bad Hersfeld, Germany Where I started from Does she smile the same smile I fell in love with There's  been longer spaces Between our communiques Before leaving Bremerhaven And making that ten day ocean trip I still missed the warm closeness Until the last phone call She told me  she wanted one more fling One more so she could squeeze The last sweet drop from college life Before we went on the marriage tour Where she longed to make All we could of another day Ringing out our church bells     But I felt a little cheated For her to have a relationship And me to feel the anguish To always  wonder why She couldn't hold on Just one more whisk of time Still it's so poetic in its justice That she'll see no one here To say goodbye to
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Feb 15, 2015
Feb 15, 2015 at 2:36 PM UTC
Heartbroke in Carrollton
It was a long long ride To Carrollton, Georgia From Bad Hersfeld, Germany Where I started from Does she smile the same smile I fell in love with There's  been longer spaces Between our communiques Before leaving Bremerhaven And making that ten day ocean trip I still missed the warm closeness Until the last phone call She told me  she wanted one more fling One more so she could squeeze The last sweet drop from college life Before we went on the marriage tour Where she longed to make All we could of another day Ringing out our church bells     But I felt a little cheated For her to have a relationship And me to feel the anguish To always  wonder why She couldn't hold on Just one more whisk of time Still it's so poetic in its justice That she'll see no one here To say goodbye to
louisbrown
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Feb 15, 2015
Feb 15, 2015 at 2:36 PM UTC
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