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7/23/2014 the plane rolls over the california mountains we pass over homes, and stores, and jails we pass over the bars, where bitter old men go to remind them of their sorrows we pass the ********** where 20 year old men go to feel like lions we pass the cloudy river, where a man sits fishing for not fish, but love we pass the jail, where a ***** woman sits and prays for heaven to take her we pass the hills, where couples go to **** and die we pass the roads, full of insensitive men, crying women, vomiting kids, and clueless elders we pass the land which has witnessed the genocide of a people we pass over a thousand murderers, and a thousand molesters, and a thousand arsonists, and a thousand lunatics we pass over a land founded on the color of white and *** we pass over this hell, I look towards the man on my left a 40 something year old business man, reading a mag, drinking a coke, and sipping up his cluelessness then there are the people behind me indian 2 women, and a child a mother, daughter, and grandchild who must know all too well how much of a hell we're in, but they do not bite their thumb for maybe this is meant to be, maybe there is no way to escape this, maybe there is no way to fix this yet, I do bite my tongue at the world I do bite my tongue at humanity, at society, at love, at loneliness yes, I bite my tongue at people but as we pass above the clouds, and hell slowly vanishes beneath a film of illusion, my thoughts do vanish, and I no longer am reminded of hell © 2014 Rembrin Hawke
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Jul 26, 2014
Jul 26, 2014 at 2:39 AM UTC
Hell
7/23/2014 the plane rolls over the california mountains we pass over homes, and stores, and jails we pass over the bars, where bitter old men go to remind them of their sorrows we pass the ********** where 20 year old men go to feel like lions we pass the cloudy river, where a man sits fishing for not fish, but love we pass the jail, where a ***** woman sits and prays for heaven to take her we pass the hills, where couples go to **** and die we pass the roads, full of insensitive men, crying women, vomiting kids, and clueless elders we pass the land which has witnessed the genocide of a people we pass over a thousand murderers, and a thousand molesters, and a thousand arsonists, and a thousand lunatics we pass over a land founded on the color of white and *** we pass over this hell, I look towards the man on my left a 40 something year old business man, reading a mag, drinking a coke, and sipping up his cluelessness then there are the people behind me indian 2 women, and a child a mother, daughter, and grandchild who must know all too well how much of a hell we're in, but they do not bite their thumb for maybe this is meant to be, maybe there is no way to escape this, maybe there is no way to fix this yet, I do bite my tongue at the world I do bite my tongue at humanity, at society, at love, at loneliness yes, I bite my tongue at people but as we pass above the clouds, and hell slowly vanishes beneath a film of illusion, my thoughts do vanish, and I no longer am reminded of hell © 2014 Rembrin Hawke
I've been reading quite a bit Bukowski lately, as you may possibly be able to tell. He's rubbed off on me a tad, and I'm not sure how to feel about that. Cynicality is not a very good trait.
rembrin-hawke
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Jul 26, 2014
Jul 26, 2014 at 2:39 AM UTC
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