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Savouring ever The behoof of cheer Flying White crane of hunger ***** the peach bitter Dropping The desire went sour Alleging for better Flavouring. ©_shade_of_a_lonely_girl
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May 7, 2019
May 7, 2019 at 3:24 AM UTC
The Cranes and Peaches
Savouring ever The behoof of cheer Flying White crane of hunger ***** the peach bitter Dropping The desire went sour Alleging for better Flavouring. ©_shade_of_a_lonely_girl
Written in Lai Poetry form. The lai is another French form. It’s a nine-line poem or stanza that uses an “a” and “b” rhyme following this pattern: aabaabaab. The lines with an “a” rhyme use 5 syllables; the “b” rhyme lines have 2 syllables. It feels kind of like organized skeletonic verse.
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May 7, 2019
May 7, 2019 at 3:24 AM UTC
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