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“Lord have mercy,” you dolefully sigh, your song awaiting my reply. ”Have Mercy on me,” each chord explains, your baby is lost and torn heart pains. With tired feet I softly croon my dark agreement, a bluesy tune. I stir my cocoa – a condoling toast – and welcome you in as your lonely host. Suspended in your mournful zephyr, I bear the wounds you’ll always suffer, the Atlas burden that breaks your back, your scarlet letter weathered black, and offer you my own lament of how my stormy Monday went. Then, like a wing-footed Gabriel, he sings his holy madrigal. With merciful swiftness my beloved appears, and whispers, ”Darling, I am here,” Then our duet becomes one person less, As I am             undone                         with                                happiness.
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May 30, 2011
May 30, 2011 at 9:34 PM UTC
Stormy Monday
“Lord have mercy,” you dolefully sigh, your song awaiting my reply. ”Have Mercy on me,” each chord explains, your baby is lost and torn heart pains. With tired feet I softly croon my dark agreement, a bluesy tune. I stir my cocoa – a condoling toast – and welcome you in as your lonely host. Suspended in your mournful zephyr, I bear the wounds you’ll always suffer, the Atlas burden that breaks your back, your scarlet letter weathered black, and offer you my own lament of how my stormy Monday went. Then, like a wing-footed Gabriel, he sings his holy madrigal. With merciful swiftness my beloved appears, and whispers, ”Darling, I am here,” Then our duet becomes one person less, As I am             undone                         with                                happiness.
tried to follow the rhyme scheme of "the mother's loathing of balloons." Not half as effective as A.E. Stallings, but i will cross my fingers that she considers pathetic imitation to be flattery.
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May 30, 2011
May 30, 2011 at 9:34 PM UTC
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