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"heaven's really crowded," peter said to me over black coffee on Maple Street while we watched the kings and counselors in collegiate sweaters lose all their religion like we'd lost ours. it fell like hailstones— they all flipped their collars up and their heads down; we looked cozy in the window and we laughed like we weren't freezing too. "this weather's crazy," he shook his head and rubbed his hands together for the friction; "hellfire looks better every day." we smiled and put our gloves back on to revel in our endless earthly cold. quietly we weighed his words and decided they were heavy; we lit a cigarette to share, blew the smoke up at the holy high school dance and said with youthful vehemence, "god ****
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May 22, 2013
May 22, 2013 at 10:40 PM UTC
Peter (11/2010)
"heaven's really crowded," peter said to me over black coffee on Maple Street while we watched the kings and counselors in collegiate sweaters lose all their religion like we'd lost ours. it fell like hailstones— they all flipped their collars up and their heads down; we looked cozy in the window and we laughed like we weren't freezing too. "this weather's crazy," he shook his head and rubbed his hands together for the friction; "hellfire looks better every day." we smiled and put our gloves back on to revel in our endless earthly cold. quietly we weighed his words and decided they were heavy; we lit a cigarette to share, blew the smoke up at the holy high school dance and said with youthful vehemence, "god ****
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May 22, 2013
May 22, 2013 at 10:40 PM UTC
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