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I think of seawater because of its briny tang, because when, by accident, it trips into my mouth, coats the inside of my cheeks in a clear, chloride gloss. I think of seawater because of the way it blooms along the shore, dazzling white jewels slinking up our toes, our feet left with a glimmer, slippery and clean. I think of seawater because your hair was soaked, chestnut brown trickles wriggling down your face and I could smell the beach in the pool of your neck, fresh and transparent at the crook of your lips.
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Sep 12, 2015
Sep 12, 2015 at 11:45 AM UTC
Seawater
I think of seawater because of its briny tang, because when, by accident, it trips into my mouth, coats the inside of my cheeks in a clear, chloride gloss. I think of seawater because of the way it blooms along the shore, dazzling white jewels slinking up our toes, our feet left with a glimmer, slippery and clean. I think of seawater because your hair was soaked, chestnut brown trickles wriggling down your face and I could smell the beach in the pool of your neck, fresh and transparent at the crook of your lips.
Written: September 2015. Explanation: A poem written in my own time, not quite as good as I wanted it to be, but still satisfying. All feedback welcome as always. A link to my Facebook writing page can be found on my HP home page. NOTE: Many of my older pieces will be removed from HP in the coming months.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Sep 12, 2015
Sep 12, 2015 at 11:45 AM UTC
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