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No, not a melting *** you know, the kind you get in industrial kitchens: heavy, stained, covered and sealed, left to boil and bubble, leaving questions about herbs and spices and what we’ve concealed. No, not a melting *** but a large, glass salad bowl, the kind you place in the centre of a garden trestle table glistening in the sunlight, with two oversized dark wood serving spoons and a glossy drizzle of vinaigrette dressing. The glass revealing every shade of green and black and red, yellow and white teasing us with every crunch of each anticipated bite, each variety and shape, inviting us to participate, to fill our plates and in this feast of an adventure, to celebrate what we are - together.
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Jun 3, 2022
Jun 3, 2022 at 5:30 AM UTC
Salad bowl
No, not a melting *** you know, the kind you get in industrial kitchens: heavy, stained, covered and sealed, left to boil and bubble, leaving questions about herbs and spices and what we’ve concealed. No, not a melting *** but a large, glass salad bowl, the kind you place in the centre of a garden trestle table glistening in the sunlight, with two oversized dark wood serving spoons and a glossy drizzle of vinaigrette dressing. The glass revealing every shade of green and black and red, yellow and white teasing us with every crunch of each anticipated bite, each variety and shape, inviting us to participate, to fill our plates and in this feast of an adventure, to celebrate what we are - together.
[Re-write after Arvon retreat June 2022] I dislike the image of a melting *** - it paints a picture of lost identity. I prefer the picture of a salad - combing flavours into something colourful and worth celebrating.
stevejeff
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Jun 3, 2022
Jun 3, 2022 at 5:30 AM UTC
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