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I stopped believing in god because I couldn't hear him, because each night I prayed I felt foolish when no one answered, because I couldn't see the evidence of him but his absence. But I realize, that religion is faith trusting, blind and sometimes deaf faith is the blind leading the blind. I stopped believing in god because I found people. because, I could reach out and be held, because I could close my eyes and feel their presence, because I could talk and finally be heard. I put my faith in the cracks of their hands and even if they lied it didn't seem to matter, they could hurt me and I could hurt them; we could be mutually destructive and yet create something beautiful together. I belive in people and sometimes they believe in me.
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May 11, 2018
May 11, 2018 at 3:12 PM UTC
accepted prayers, resigned wishes
I stopped believing in god because I couldn't hear him, because each night I prayed I felt foolish when no one answered, because I couldn't see the evidence of him but his absence. But I realize, that religion is faith trusting, blind and sometimes deaf faith is the blind leading the blind. I stopped believing in god because I found people. because, I could reach out and be held, because I could close my eyes and feel their presence, because I could talk and finally be heard. I put my faith in the cracks of their hands and even if they lied it didn't seem to matter, they could hurt me and I could hurt them; we could be mutually destructive and yet create something beautiful together. I belive in people and sometimes they believe in me.
Title inspired by Alexander Pope's Eternal Sunshine Also, I don't mean any offense, fyi
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28/F/American
May 11, 2018
May 11, 2018 at 3:12 PM UTC
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