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I can’t concentrate with all this sweat surrounding mine.

I let go for seconds it seemed,

and the world died into me;

reliving it’s good times.

And I loved, mindless,

like lost kids.

Like you kids.

I loved blindly.

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Published: Mar 29, 2012
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