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Can I have a rest, for I am very tired. of usual beings, come and go, made us weak and little blind. You're all over me, thus, can I rest? Everywhere I look, You have proven me the best. I am exhausted, Will you let me be? I cannot move forward, on the the things I see. Squeezed with the happenings, I want a revamp. release me from the past, wicked sinked in swamp. Sour flavoured outings, did took a toll on me. I want you to take charge, Please let me be. I want to relax, my tired soul. would you let me to rest, or in pain come let me howl. Can I have a rest? Please let me so. With you I found, a partner to call. Are you allowing me now? please let me fall, Down in questions, sheered in a roll. Are you allowing me now? I hope you really do. Can I rest? ..My eyes on you.
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May 8, 2011
May 8, 2011 at 11:39 PM UTC
Can I rest?
Can I have a rest, for I am very tired. of usual beings, come and go, made us weak and little blind. You're all over me, thus, can I rest? Everywhere I look, You have proven me the best. I am exhausted, Will you let me be? I cannot move forward, on the the things I see. Squeezed with the happenings, I want a revamp. release me from the past, wicked sinked in swamp. Sour flavoured outings, did took a toll on me. I want you to take charge, Please let me be. I want to relax, my tired soul. would you let me to rest, or in pain come let me howl. Can I have a rest? Please let me so. With you I found, a partner to call. Are you allowing me now? please let me fall, Down in questions, sheered in a roll. Are you allowing me now? I hope you really do. Can I rest? ..My eyes on you.
(c) 5.9.2011 - Can I rest? - jcjuatco
Jcjuatco
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May 8, 2011
May 8, 2011 at 11:39 PM UTC
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