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Outside the usual longitude and latitude sat an uncommon place, one with zero gratitude or an ounce of grace. The story goes like this: the rules were what each one wished, every issue was unceremoniously settled with a fist, the words 'thank you', therefore, were often missed. Children became parents, parents became children, with wisdom no longer an inheritance, good sense fell on its head and became broken. With nothing but foolishness in their blood, such a place was hard to defend, and like a flood, it raged, so it was until the bitter end.
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Feb 7
Feb 7, 2026 at 2:35 AM UTC
Infernal Paradiso
Outside the usual longitude and latitude sat an uncommon place, one with zero gratitude or an ounce of grace. The story goes like this: the rules were what each one wished, every issue was unceremoniously settled with a fist, the words 'thank you', therefore, were often missed. Children became parents, parents became children, with wisdom no longer an inheritance, good sense fell on its head and became broken. With nothing but foolishness in their blood, such a place was hard to defend, and like a flood, it raged, so it was until the bitter end.
Carlo-C-Gomez
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56/M/The Exclusion Zone
Feb 7
Feb 7, 2026 at 2:35 AM UTC
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