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Pining for a Loss Unkown

I don't think I can…

I promised and she's happy

I'm … complacent, if…

…Not happy.

When I was younger I was devout

To my ideals. I would speak

With fervor and vision

About dark beauty and my take

On the human condition.

…About how we are bound to nature

By blood and *** through

Evolution and mutation.

…About how humans were polyamorus

Creatures, beings of righteous love,

And the bearers of pain and choice.

 

Then I learned what choice is.

I chose money and comfort

instead of pain and hardship.

My vision of a glorious life lived

On Occam's sharp blade

Was dulled on salty, wet silk sheets.

Each choice, made out of love

On what I believed to be

A Foundation of compromise.

Each choice took a piece of

darkest nature from me and returned me to

safe suburban parks

The dark,now,

illuminated by street lamps.

 

Now when I look at my path

And feel the old me rising

Knowing I must make a choice

I don't think I can…

I promised and she's happy

I'm … complacent, if…

…Not happy.

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Written by
pete-badertscher
American
Published
Oct 23, 2023
Lines·Words
36·183
Notes

Poetry for the loss of something one never had for valid but meaningless reasons

Tags
#loss#love#compromise#feeling#lost#feelings
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