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The cold metal door Squeeaaaks And swings to the wall In a thump of agony. Lever-action. The bolt Cliiiicks To the hammer, before the Brittle door-shavings Rocket outwards in a BANG! Metal shatters like laminate. In a way, its like The spirit.
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Nov 19, 2018
Nov 19, 2018 at 4:38 PM UTC
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The cold metal door Squeeaaaks And swings to the wall In a thump of agony. Lever-action. The bolt Cliiiicks To the hammer, before the Brittle door-shavings Rocket outwards in a BANG! Metal shatters like laminate. In a way, its like The spirit.
A poem about erosion. #12 in the Distant Dystopia anthology. © Lewis Hyden, 2018
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Nov 19, 2018
Nov 19, 2018 at 4:38 PM UTC
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