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Saguaros stood like spiny-sentinels as I sped along the Camino, alone, top down. Warm winds & tequila-breath burned my shot-eyes when I first spotted the thumbing Lupita, way south of Ensenada on good 'ole 1. Her graceful toothy-smile under her full lips seemed gracious as I pulled up alongside her, kicked the door open. She hopped in & we catapulted with her hair streaming & brown-skin shining in the falling sun. We hit high speeds smiling as we continued south, driving into the coming night. Twinkling-stars & static-filled La Bamba-tunes kept us company. We discussed sacred-mysteries in broken languages, later, counted each others toes, rubbed noses in my bedroll. In the morning, she was gone left me a note & the ruffled rose she had pinned in her raven-black hair. As I drove off in a dreamy-state, somewhat disappointed, a spiraling one, a lone black bird trailed behind me, I'm sure it was her. Soon, she disappeared from my rear view memory, but never out of my mind.
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Feb 7, 2014
Feb 7, 2014 at 10:39 AM UTC
Never Out of My Mind (The Thumbing Lupita)
Saguaros stood like spiny-sentinels as I sped along the Camino, alone, top down. Warm winds & tequila-breath burned my shot-eyes when I first spotted the thumbing Lupita, way south of Ensenada on good 'ole 1. Her graceful toothy-smile under her full lips seemed gracious as I pulled up alongside her, kicked the door open. She hopped in & we catapulted with her hair streaming & brown-skin shining in the falling sun. We hit high speeds smiling as we continued south, driving into the coming night. Twinkling-stars & static-filled La Bamba-tunes kept us company. We discussed sacred-mysteries in broken languages, later, counted each others toes, rubbed noses in my bedroll. In the morning, she was gone left me a note & the ruffled rose she had pinned in her raven-black hair. As I drove off in a dreamy-state, somewhat disappointed, a spiraling one, a lone black bird trailed behind me, I'm sure it was her. Soon, she disappeared from my rear view memory, but never out of my mind.
jonny-angel
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Feb 7, 2014
Feb 7, 2014 at 10:39 AM UTC
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