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a broken bone

thoughts constant. never far from my mind.

you. you are inside me.

trying to draw you out like a fish from water

but i’m drowning instead.

 

first. i am first. on top. top *****

my dear, don’t you think this is unreal?

metal that melts at my touch.

i can think no further. think nothing of it.

 

drowning in the midst of a stare. you to me. connected and broke. there is a connection. ///broken. snip.

 

 

-i wish he were more persistent-

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deana-luna
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Feb 11, 2014
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