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Excuse me if my words cut deep when the lines were meant to ***** the conscience sleeping down below slumbering while a world drowned I'll lean into the **** asking for the next few minutes long enough to read the text a poem's reflection of your soul. The slash draws red upon the skin this is the color shared by all reminder of the liquid shared crimson base below gold threads yet still the colors are confused gold leads to silver, then to green imagining reality where none should be if caring is for the fellow man. What is the measure for your charge dictation of what comes before? all things aligned, in their time done something's first, the highest goal expectations writ to book's pages the clink of coin in a purse comfort gained, never lost these are the gild some have lost. It's fine to stand on the tall hill until the winds carries the screams from the eddies below the perch writhe the sinners of your mind they are not lesser than your idols specifically yourself in mirror's frame blessed by a god you only see perhaps it's your image you embrace. Ivory towers with lone residents fortunates seek the frosty air with no taint by the lost drifting up from hell's domain the stench is scattered by money's breeze the hurricane that lifts the boats to a shore that few should see shared disaster seen as reprieve. When red is ocean's hue my words seek to disabuse those with skin too thick to feel with images from the other world when red is spilled at time's course no matter how remote a life became I hope my words found a place to be considered before the end. © 2017. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved. 20170512.
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May 12, 2017
May 12, 2017 at 5:21 AM UTC
The Other World
Excuse me if my words cut deep when the lines were meant to ***** the conscience sleeping down below slumbering while a world drowned I'll lean into the **** asking for the next few minutes long enough to read the text a poem's reflection of your soul. The slash draws red upon the skin this is the color shared by all reminder of the liquid shared crimson base below gold threads yet still the colors are confused gold leads to silver, then to green imagining reality where none should be if caring is for the fellow man. What is the measure for your charge dictation of what comes before? all things aligned, in their time done something's first, the highest goal expectations writ to book's pages the clink of coin in a purse comfort gained, never lost these are the gild some have lost. It's fine to stand on the tall hill until the winds carries the screams from the eddies below the perch writhe the sinners of your mind they are not lesser than your idols specifically yourself in mirror's frame blessed by a god you only see perhaps it's your image you embrace. Ivory towers with lone residents fortunates seek the frosty air with no taint by the lost drifting up from hell's domain the stench is scattered by money's breeze the hurricane that lifts the boats to a shore that few should see shared disaster seen as reprieve. When red is ocean's hue my words seek to disabuse those with skin too thick to feel with images from the other world when red is spilled at time's course no matter how remote a life became I hope my words found a place to be considered before the end. © 2017. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved. 20170512.
My poem, “The Other World”, was inspired by Benedict Smith’s quote “I asked her if she believed in love, and she smiled and said that it as her most elaborate method of self-hurt”.
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May 12, 2017
May 12, 2017 at 5:21 AM UTC
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