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You are refreshing like the breeze on a hot day. It is not in that you make me forget the rough environment and offer a moment of calm. And not in the motion that relieves the senses through gust. But rather, cleansing in that you remind me of juxtapositions in the world: the arid and cool; the stale and fleeting. Just like the wind, you are brevity that clearly shows why contrasts highlight and you are the pleasant other underscored.
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Oct 11, 2014
Oct 11, 2014 at 12:48 PM UTC
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You are refreshing like the breeze on a hot day. It is not in that you make me forget the rough environment and offer a moment of calm. And not in the motion that relieves the senses through gust. But rather, cleansing in that you remind me of juxtapositions in the world: the arid and cool; the stale and fleeting. Just like the wind, you are brevity that clearly shows why contrasts highlight and you are the pleasant other underscored.
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Oct 11, 2014
Oct 11, 2014 at 12:48 PM UTC
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