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Just lately, 'learned,' (what a double entendre that is!), a long time resident and story teller in the empire of creatives who coexist with each other in two dimensions, in deep isolation and simultaneously in a camaraderie of bonded bones of mutuality, of deep, affectionate camaraderie admiration for another human, who struggles and desires to please the world by putting worthy words before us to be felt, not just read in our bosoms, but-placed deeper still, in our very souls. As is my custom, I oft forget what was written by me, and awoke feeling guilty that I never gave him "His" own poem. So I looked him up on the HP site, and lo and behold! this tribute came up first...but cease not here, seize this man's living testimonies to the beauty of life and family.   I wrote this, upon refection, for us, a year ago... Nat Lipstadt Aug 2024 For Spygrandson:  A Man Who Looks in the Mirror, & Sees a Potholder of Simple Design… ~ for spygrandson ~ with deep affection https://hellopoetry.com/spysgrandson/ <> I am en~titled by him, commissioned by his exacting wording of this poem’s titular naming, all my previous attempts are failures, over designed, too artistic for his modest self~reckoning & bearded demeanor, they demanded denial with request for simplicity of an unflowery reckoning, a clean shave, so to speak… a potholder of simple design, a modest picture self-drawn, but his stories are sorties tall, he draws you in, worthy draftsman sketches of words, tales short, poems complete, tales so sweet, of characters uniquely complete, and you think, they cannot be fictional? and you know they’re no such thing, ok, maybe, some taller and a few perhaps dreamed, the big characters of those giants of simple men, whose deeds were not mythical, ok, almost mythical… but truth of the humans of the hammered and nailed tough skin, who built homesteads in the plain, in mountains, by rivers that snaked, unmapped, except on their hearts and feet the humans, that made up the raw & naked bond holders of these United States: bonded by character to the soil and its curvaceous dancing topography from & of the center of our country, but with eyes keen enough to stretch from coast to coast, to see to shining seas yes, true, the grandson be he to/of an almost mythical man, and so took thus his penned name, the grandfather, a real person of whom stories are yet told, for no one can be sure that & of what deeds this spy did, on hostile, unfamiliar, continents, but the photographic proofs, I have seen… His blood thickened by many infusions, a cross cultural experiment, happily not unique, just **** rare but enough of this; read him, let his tongue take you to the unfamiliar, a literary Ansel Adams, who never saw the plain(s) men & women, unworthy of being forgotten but forever being celebrated ask him for a potpourri of his short stories of war, the bonds that men forge in combat, tween the dead that still live on and the living, who have unreadable dead spots within, they carry their dying glances, their dying wishes, and who are honored by him in his continuing recollections with walking stick in hand, even if going outside to “just” measure the snowy depths, he leave markers and trailers, for us to recall how to weep, from love and pain, from following generations of his beautiful blonde children who are poster models for the traditional all american imagery, but thriving within, with  his wanderlust, his mixed fiery visions, and acting, singing out dramas befitting their inherited visions… <> here I cease, here I weep, at the impoverished words scrivened in haste, through tears of pleasure intended to give honor to this man, who cedes me the pleasure of his existence, and enhances my world when he asks me, unwittingly commissions! a poem, about the human character, who see himself unusually! “as a potholder with a simple design” and as usual, I fail miserable… maybe, nick the outer edge of a bullseye target, because the important words that he deserves, I have not yet mentioned: honor, loving kindness and friend. perhaps he is correct, but doesn’t grasp that without simple men like him to hold the *** upright and firm, we all would be lesser or even lost. maybe, now I am one with done
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Aug 23, 2025
Aug 23, 2025 at 8:16 AM UTC
Untitled: Spygrandson has passed away (The Bonds and Bones of Writers)
Just lately, 'learned,' (what a double entendre that is!), a long time resident and story teller in the empire of creatives who coexist with each other in two dimensions, in deep isolation and simultaneously in a camaraderie of bonded bones of mutuality, of deep, affectionate camaraderie admiration for another human, who struggles and desires to please the world by putting worthy words before us to be felt, not just read in our bosoms, but-placed deeper still, in our very souls. As is my custom, I oft forget what was written by me, and awoke feeling guilty that I never gave him "His" own poem. So I looked him up on the HP site, and lo and behold! this tribute came up first...but cease not here, seize this man's living testimonies to the beauty of life and family.   I wrote this, upon refection, for us, a year ago... Nat Lipstadt Aug 2024 For Spygrandson:  A Man Who Looks in the Mirror, & Sees a Potholder of Simple Design… ~ for spygrandson ~ with deep affection https://hellopoetry.com/spysgrandson/ <> I am en~titled by him, commissioned by his exacting wording of this poem’s titular naming, all my previous attempts are failures, over designed, too artistic for his modest self~reckoning & bearded demeanor, they demanded denial with request for simplicity of an unflowery reckoning, a clean shave, so to speak… a potholder of simple design, a modest picture self-drawn, but his stories are sorties tall, he draws you in, worthy draftsman sketches of words, tales short, poems complete, tales so sweet, of characters uniquely complete, and you think, they cannot be fictional? and you know they’re no such thing, ok, maybe, some taller and a few perhaps dreamed, the big characters of those giants of simple men, whose deeds were not mythical, ok, almost mythical… but truth of the humans of the hammered and nailed tough skin, who built homesteads in the plain, in mountains, by rivers that snaked, unmapped, except on their hearts and feet the humans, that made up the raw & naked bond holders of these United States: bonded by character to the soil and its curvaceous dancing topography from & of the center of our country, but with eyes keen enough to stretch from coast to coast, to see to shining seas yes, true, the grandson be he to/of an almost mythical man, and so took thus his penned name, the grandfather, a real person of whom stories are yet told, for no one can be sure that & of what deeds this spy did, on hostile, unfamiliar, continents, but the photographic proofs, I have seen… His blood thickened by many infusions, a cross cultural experiment, happily not unique, just **** rare but enough of this; read him, let his tongue take you to the unfamiliar, a literary Ansel Adams, who never saw the plain(s) men & women, unworthy of being forgotten but forever being celebrated ask him for a potpourri of his short stories of war, the bonds that men forge in combat, tween the dead that still live on and the living, who have unreadable dead spots within, they carry their dying glances, their dying wishes, and who are honored by him in his continuing recollections with walking stick in hand, even if going outside to “just” measure the snowy depths, he leave markers and trailers, for us to recall how to weep, from love and pain, from following generations of his beautiful blonde children who are poster models for the traditional all american imagery, but thriving within, with  his wanderlust, his mixed fiery visions, and acting, singing out dramas befitting their inherited visions… <> here I cease, here I weep, at the impoverished words scrivened in haste, through tears of pleasure intended to give honor to this man, who cedes me the pleasure of his existence, and enhances my world when he asks me, unwittingly commissions! a poem, about the human character, who see himself unusually! “as a potholder with a simple design” and as usual, I fail miserable… maybe, nick the outer edge of a bullseye target, because the important words that he deserves, I have not yet mentioned: honor, loving kindness and friend. perhaps he is correct, but doesn’t grasp that without simple men like him to hold the *** upright and firm, we all would be lesser or even lost. maybe, now I am one with done
weeping, bereft and lessened I, write, weep & wipe read https://hellopoetry.com/spysgrandson/ rinse and repeat, and so it goes, on and on and on
nat-lipstadt
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Aug 23, 2025
Aug 23, 2025 at 8:16 AM UTC
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