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lunch break  fire escape                      seagulls hover  far below               rattled  by stern winds             thoughts battle  their own nature     no progress  in their flight       .
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Mar 28, 2025
Mar 28, 2025 at 11:14 AM UTC
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lunch break  fire escape                      seagulls hover  far below               rattled  by stern winds             thoughts battle  their own nature     no progress  in their flight       .
tanka style original notes :my high perch on ninth /fire escape /the backs of gulls below /flight   rattled with wind /no forward progress in flight
#tanka#brevity#nature#thoughts#cold#winter#gulls#birds#heights#flight
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Mar 28, 2025
Mar 28, 2025 at 11:14 AM UTC
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