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half formed thoughts, half finished lines, breakfast  half eaten, left on the... half asleep, half awake, half dressed child, starting today... a mistake. let us rewind, to, when we were all still abed. then when the alarm rings out snooze it pretend we are dead at least to this half made greyest day and turn away from this half formed mayhem of  harried reality go back, go back, to the land of dreams for today, the better choice... no half sown seams to burst, hems to trip on, clothes, that will not zip, the zip on that set of pants that i must fix no bad hair, no external rants, about work incomplete,(half done). no thinking rude thoughts, about stinking heat swelled feet. just cool linen, pressed against my tired cheek .. and an island deserted... with cool breeze and a fridge with filled with chocolate eclairs and iced coffee ... a big squishy chair... utopia .... see i am halfway there.. but halfway here also and the bell has rung. time for these... half @rsed musings to be done. phones to answer, emails too reports to analyse, lectures to prepare, here i am half an hour into the day and already...  way.. too tired to deal.... so position.. my clock hands... at.. half way past... i don't care.
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Apr 18, 2014
Apr 18, 2014 at 5:00 PM UTC
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half formed thoughts, half finished lines, breakfast  half eaten, left on the... half asleep, half awake, half dressed child, starting today... a mistake. let us rewind, to, when we were all still abed. then when the alarm rings out snooze it pretend we are dead at least to this half made greyest day and turn away from this half formed mayhem of  harried reality go back, go back, to the land of dreams for today, the better choice... no half sown seams to burst, hems to trip on, clothes, that will not zip, the zip on that set of pants that i must fix no bad hair, no external rants, about work incomplete,(half done). no thinking rude thoughts, about stinking heat swelled feet. just cool linen, pressed against my tired cheek .. and an island deserted... with cool breeze and a fridge with filled with chocolate eclairs and iced coffee ... a big squishy chair... utopia .... see i am halfway there.. but halfway here also and the bell has rung. time for these... half @rsed musings to be done. phones to answer, emails too reports to analyse, lectures to prepare, here i am half an hour into the day and already...  way.. too tired to deal.... so position.. my clock hands... at.. half way past... i don't care.
this, an older piece, but suits the mood still not particularly inspired
betterdays
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F/Australian
Apr 18, 2014
Apr 18, 2014 at 5:00 PM UTC
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