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He said I want to see where your mind goes In the mists of life's bitter throes I want to see if you'll plateau or grow He said Your mind mustn't go where only I want to see For you are painting this canvas not me Your mind mustn't wonder so apologetically He said I may go where your mind wants to see But only in our dreams, where we'll meet subconsciously I may go but your mind will stay sempiternity
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Oct 12, 2017
Oct 12, 2017 at 11:31 AM UTC
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He said I want to see where your mind goes In the mists of life's bitter throes I want to see if you'll plateau or grow He said Your mind mustn't go where only I want to see For you are painting this canvas not me Your mind mustn't wonder so apologetically He said I may go where your mind wants to see But only in our dreams, where we'll meet subconsciously I may go but your mind will stay sempiternity
This poem was inspired from a saved snapchat "I want to see where your mind goes" sent from my now boyfriend. He saved it. So every time I would look at our conversation on snapchat that was the only sentace saved. If I were more OCD it probably would have bothered me. But I felt like it had a deeper underlying meaning to it whether
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Oct 12, 2017 at 11:31 AM UTC
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