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I'm feeling quite neurotic, to put it plain. My conscience is muddied, mind soaked through with rain. Nothing feels right, no comfort will do. Might dig myself a hole and stay there a day or two Won't walk on the land, just admire the view. There seems to be nothing that can make me feel sane And yet, you dig deep, try to keep me sane.
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Sep 10, 2018
Sep 10, 2018 at 2:34 PM UTC
dig deep
I'm feeling quite neurotic, to put it plain. My conscience is muddied, mind soaked through with rain. Nothing feels right, no comfort will do. Might dig myself a hole and stay there a day or two Won't walk on the land, just admire the view. There seems to be nothing that can make me feel sane And yet, you dig deep, try to keep me sane.
Another assigned piece, this time to take a famous rhyming piece of writing and rewrite everything but the final, rhyming word. I used the first verse of Blind Melon's "No Rain."
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Sep 10, 2018
Sep 10, 2018 at 2:34 PM UTC
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