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It smelled like cheap beer and stale cigarettes, and my shoes stuck to the floor. My head throbbed with an ache even my ***** tonics couldn't soothe, and watching you watching her made me feel short of breath. I shook her hand and smiled as I glanced at the hickey on your neck. You gave me a hug and offered me a cigarette, and I smoked it in the corner Alone.
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Aug 14, 2012
Aug 14, 2012 at 9:51 PM UTC
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It smelled like cheap beer and stale cigarettes, and my shoes stuck to the floor. My head throbbed with an ache even my ***** tonics couldn't soothe, and watching you watching her made me feel short of breath. I shook her hand and smiled as I glanced at the hickey on your neck. You gave me a hug and offered me a cigarette, and I smoked it in the corner Alone.
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Aug 14, 2012
Aug 14, 2012 at 9:51 PM UTC
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