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The place looked like an inn, or was it a sin house? no idea he had, He made himself believe that he was a pilgrim, but free from bindings of any kind, as he was going around  holy places in  penance, after mourning his father's death had  long black beard and saffron robes,a Hindu Sadhu look like,( renouncing nothing!) She said she was a fallen woman, he told she should get up and go, not wasting time, he has no wisdom yet worth giving, but she still expected and stood by, waiting so he had to put his wisdom cap on,"Stressed out men and catty women" he said what occurred then "this world gets tattered by them and their kin, the sooner one understands this the better, beyond the quagmire  focus your vision; uncluttered  mind, that's where to begin"
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Nov 5, 2013
Nov 5, 2013 at 9:54 AM UTC
The only wise advice to offer the world
The place looked like an inn, or was it a sin house? no idea he had, He made himself believe that he was a pilgrim, but free from bindings of any kind, as he was going around  holy places in  penance, after mourning his father's death had  long black beard and saffron robes,a Hindu Sadhu look like,( renouncing nothing!) She said she was a fallen woman, he told she should get up and go, not wasting time, he has no wisdom yet worth giving, but she still expected and stood by, waiting so he had to put his wisdom cap on,"Stressed out men and catty women" he said what occurred then "this world gets tattered by them and their kin, the sooner one understands this the better, beyond the quagmire  focus your vision; uncluttered  mind, that's where to begin"
sadhu..holy man Edited version
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Nov 5, 2013
Nov 5, 2013 at 9:54 AM UTC
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