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Early summer after school after low tea of bread and jam and a glass of milk you sat with Fay on the roof of the pram shed of Banks House and looked up Meadow Row watching the sun slowly going down on the busy horizon she clothed in a grey dress with black plimsolls and you in fading jeans and open necked shirt and she said my daddy says I’ve to learn the Credo in Latin by the summer holidays or there’ll be trouble what the heck’s the Credo? you asked looking at the heels of her plimsolled feet hitting the wall of the pram shed it’s the I Believe prayer setting out the items of our beliefs in the Catholic Church why Latin? you said noticing fading bruises on her thighs as the hem of her dress moved as she banged her heels against the wall because daddy said so she said looking at the orangey sun in the darkening blue sky I don’t know many prayers you said at least not all the way through except the ones they teach us at school even then some of the boys put their own words in which I couldn’t repeat to you she looked at you her fair hair adding beauty to her pale face and water colour blue of eyes best not to she said softly don’t your parents insist you learn prayers? she asked no you said my old man wouldn’t know a prayer if it came up and tickled his moustache she smiled and looked away then after a few moments of silence she said the sun looks like a big orange on a big blue cloth doesn’t it? yes you said looking skyward then watched the traffic pass by at the end of Meadow Row and the bombsite outline on the right hand side and the shadows caused by the lowering sun then you lowered your sight to the fading bruises on her thighs and the watercolour blue of her bright clear eyes.
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Feb 26, 2013
Feb 26, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
FAY AND YOU AND THE ORANGE SUN.
Early summer after school after low tea of bread and jam and a glass of milk you sat with Fay on the roof of the pram shed of Banks House and looked up Meadow Row watching the sun slowly going down on the busy horizon she clothed in a grey dress with black plimsolls and you in fading jeans and open necked shirt and she said my daddy says I’ve to learn the Credo in Latin by the summer holidays or there’ll be trouble what the heck’s the Credo? you asked looking at the heels of her plimsolled feet hitting the wall of the pram shed it’s the I Believe prayer setting out the items of our beliefs in the Catholic Church why Latin? you said noticing fading bruises on her thighs as the hem of her dress moved as she banged her heels against the wall because daddy said so she said looking at the orangey sun in the darkening blue sky I don’t know many prayers you said at least not all the way through except the ones they teach us at school even then some of the boys put their own words in which I couldn’t repeat to you she looked at you her fair hair adding beauty to her pale face and water colour blue of eyes best not to she said softly don’t your parents insist you learn prayers? she asked no you said my old man wouldn’t know a prayer if it came up and tickled his moustache she smiled and looked away then after a few moments of silence she said the sun looks like a big orange on a big blue cloth doesn’t it? yes you said looking skyward then watched the traffic pass by at the end of Meadow Row and the bombsite outline on the right hand side and the shadows caused by the lowering sun then you lowered your sight to the fading bruises on her thighs and the watercolour blue of her bright clear eyes.
terry-collett
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Feb 26, 2013
Feb 26, 2013 at 2:27 AM UTC
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