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You were an intellectual jewel a glittering phenomenon in the sky, some disturbance of space-time in which all things were knit together in a subjective pattern and so tightly pulled together that light reflected from every facet in turn, as you spun, like a windmill, like a tyger frightening in your perfect symmetry in which every stripe was a symbolism and every red a cleansing fire which purified everything it touched, or touched it. The love I felt for you was first of pity, for you did not know what it meant to feel, and you had few friends. But in time I grew to love you properly, for your complex simplicity and your ethereal strict beauty. And I thought then, that even if you could not return my love, it was enough to look at you.
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Jun 22, 2017
Jun 22, 2017 at 9:10 PM UTC
Icarus
You were an intellectual jewel a glittering phenomenon in the sky, some disturbance of space-time in which all things were knit together in a subjective pattern and so tightly pulled together that light reflected from every facet in turn, as you spun, like a windmill, like a tyger frightening in your perfect symmetry in which every stripe was a symbolism and every red a cleansing fire which purified everything it touched, or touched it. The love I felt for you was first of pity, for you did not know what it meant to feel, and you had few friends. But in time I grew to love you properly, for your complex simplicity and your ethereal strict beauty. And I thought then, that even if you could not return my love, it was enough to look at you.
Summer, 2017
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F/Illinois, USA
Jun 22, 2017
Jun 22, 2017 at 9:10 PM UTC
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