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i lost myself in fields of blue daisies cherry blossoms falling from the sky they knew not of themselves or me but they continued to be blue i cried for they would never know of their existential beauty they cried 'cause i'd never know of mine i found myself in a field of gardenias yesterday evening the petals spun 'round each other while i spun around the thoughts in my mind after 'while we became one me and the thoughts the flowers and i
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Jan 28, 2014
Jan 28, 2014 at 11:57 AM UTC
wheelbarrows and yard carts
i lost myself in fields of blue daisies cherry blossoms falling from the sky they knew not of themselves or me but they continued to be blue i cried for they would never know of their existential beauty they cried 'cause i'd never know of mine i found myself in a field of gardenias yesterday evening the petals spun 'round each other while i spun around the thoughts in my mind after 'while we became one me and the thoughts the flowers and i
my niece was four i read this to her "that was really good" she said "and it's true too"
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Jan 28, 2014
Jan 28, 2014 at 11:57 AM UTC
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