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dear lights Passing on, passing on... wonder what tune they whistle now what sort of beauty they structure and spin there, beyond this worry and woe wonder what wonder they felt before reaching out for their new-cast burdens of joy and joined in the Unity! Unity! and Praise! leaving weeping shadows behind... did they? cast one last glance over their shoulders of pity and understanding as we bend to resume our urgent tasks of love hoping to earn the key to That door.
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Mar 1, 2014
Mar 1, 2014 at 7:50 PM UTC
That Door
dear lights Passing on, passing on... wonder what tune they whistle now what sort of beauty they structure and spin there, beyond this worry and woe wonder what wonder they felt before reaching out for their new-cast burdens of joy and joined in the Unity! Unity! and Praise! leaving weeping shadows behind... did they? cast one last glance over their shoulders of pity and understanding as we bend to resume our urgent tasks of love hoping to earn the key to That door.
This is more like the original, which I prefer: That Door dear lights moving on, moving on wonder what tune they whistle now? what sort of beauty they structure and spin there, beyond this worry and woe? wonder what wonder they feel before reaching out for their new-cast burdens of joy and join in the Unity! Unity! ...and Praise! leaving weeping shadows behind... did they cast one last glance of pity and understanding over their shoulders? as we bend to resume our urgent tasks of love hoping to earn the key to That door.
tracy-malloy
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Mar 1, 2014
Mar 1, 2014 at 7:50 PM UTC
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