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All sensations got so intense, Sounds are louder, more immense. Colors richer, deeper, brighter, Breath is free and feels much lighter. Everything now falls into place, Clarity I can finally face. The whole world seems to align with me It feels amazing, but how could that be? I’m definitely in a higher state, A level of consciousness where I can control my fate. Life before felt fake and dull, And there was so much pressure inside my skull. The weight of struggle is now escaped, I don't need much, I feel so great. I finally can enjoy this life, Submerge like the blue whale and take a deep dive.
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Apr 23
Apr 23, 2026 at 2:18 AM UTC
THE KEYHOLE OF JOY
All sensations got so intense, Sounds are louder, more immense. Colors richer, deeper, brighter, Breath is free and feels much lighter. Everything now falls into place, Clarity I can finally face. The whole world seems to align with me It feels amazing, but how could that be? I’m definitely in a higher state, A level of consciousness where I can control my fate. Life before felt fake and dull, And there was so much pressure inside my skull. The weight of struggle is now escaped, I don't need much, I feel so great. I finally can enjoy this life, Submerge like the blue whale and take a deep dive.
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Apr 23
Apr 23, 2026 at 2:18 AM UTC
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