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He told me he loved me As you took your last breath Maybe if I loved you You wouldn't have left You wouldn't be dead But that's a silly thing to say Because it wouldn't make a difference I wouldn't be able to fix that voice in your head Couldn't tear down your defense Before things started spiralin' Maybe if we could have fixed...
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Aug 12, 2010
Aug 12, 2010 at 10:55 AM UTC
Painful Whatifs
He told me he loved me As you took your last breath Maybe if I loved you You wouldn't have left You wouldn't be dead But that's a silly thing to say Because it wouldn't make a difference I wouldn't be able to fix that voice in your head Couldn't tear down your defense Before things started spiralin' Maybe if we could have fixed...
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Aug 12, 2010
Aug 12, 2010 at 10:55 AM UTC
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