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You can’t walk to Moon Neither can you walk to Sun Never will red, or Ring help The second planet always mourn Negotiate and Negotiate 27 moon in its orbit yet an startling soul The blue planet and One closest to the Sun just hems round and round The gas giant planet just hangs and hangs and its Great red spot would not let us even toll Out of her core, Out of her heart Day by Day Earth falls And none can help!
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Jun 26, 2020
Jun 26, 2020 at 11:34 PM UTC
Planets
You can’t walk to Moon Neither can you walk to Sun Never will red, or Ring help The second planet always mourn Negotiate and Negotiate 27 moon in its orbit yet an startling soul The blue planet and One closest to the Sun just hems round and round The gas giant planet just hangs and hangs and its Great red spot would not let us even toll Out of her core, Out of her heart Day by Day Earth falls And none can help!
red-Mars, Ring-Saturn,The second planet-Venus, blue-Neptune, 27 moon in orbit-Uranus, Gas giant and Great red spot-Jupiter, Closest to sun-Mercury
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Jun 26, 2020
Jun 26, 2020 at 11:34 PM UTC
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