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At this moment gun in hand lying broken unable to stand would one pull the trigger maybe no hope to regain vigor bones aching can it be done uncontrollably shaking ghastly gun can one raise their arm probably not but one does consider it yes? to cause oneself harm utterly distraught on occasion when so alone soul worn with abrasion smooth unfeeling stone overwhelmed smothered in despair oh to be free from a life so unfair eyes empty as a dead sea what is a man's last thoughts on the brink of eternal darkness soul tangled to indiscernible knots already a carcass
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Nov 9, 2012
Nov 9, 2012 at 3:38 PM UTC
In The Eyes Of A Suicidal Man (Or Woman)
At this moment gun in hand lying broken unable to stand would one pull the trigger maybe no hope to regain vigor bones aching can it be done uncontrollably shaking ghastly gun can one raise their arm probably not but one does consider it yes? to cause oneself harm utterly distraught on occasion when so alone soul worn with abrasion smooth unfeeling stone overwhelmed smothered in despair oh to be free from a life so unfair eyes empty as a dead sea what is a man's last thoughts on the brink of eternal darkness soul tangled to indiscernible knots already a carcass
Chenoah
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37/F/American
Nov 9, 2012
Nov 9, 2012 at 3:38 PM UTC
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