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Balloon Trip

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•come with me on a

special trip•hop aboard my big ball-

oon • hot air from flame, the canvas would

sip•higher and higher, we won't be back too soon

•the clouds would gently kiss our cheeks • the sun

would bathe our skins with gold• mountains below

seem minute pointing up  with snow covered peaks

•turning oceans into lakes...the world seems to fold

•offering myriad picturesque views from up ab-

ove•from any angle none would lack•lastly

we'll drift...along the currents of air and

love•you could then finally say that

i've brought you on a memora-

ble trip to  the moon...

and safely back•

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•••••••••••

**I+++++++++I

I+++++++++I**

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Written by
ryn
Published
Nov 17, 2015
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22·114
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Concrete Poem 4 of 30

Tap on the hashtag "30daysofconcrete" below to view more offerings in the series. :)

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