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The coastal winds set all our orchard tree leaves dancing, vibrating like music in the air. That same clean breeze on my face generates a smile, while offering the slight scent of the oceans salty splendor. In my mind in color, behind closed eyes I can clearly see my beach, the waves, sand, rocks, all the winged creatures soaring and wind floating on the westerly air currents. I could even hear their calls to each other, and the muted laughter of human children at play. The sight of people's dogs free running the beach and cavorting in the shallow surf. An hour and a half drive each way, taken many times over most of my lifetime, seeking that view and being rewarded by it. Familiar as the faces of my beloved now grown children and nearly as comforting to gaze upon. Yes, I could make the drive, but even that gets harder these days, as most everything does. But why drive it, when all I need do is close my eyes, point my nose up into the breeze and embrace that beach in my still vivid mind's eye, while these technicolor memories last, before they all fade to black.
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May 20, 2025
May 20, 2025 at 4:38 PM UTC
Mind Travel
The coastal winds set all our orchard tree leaves dancing, vibrating like music in the air. That same clean breeze on my face generates a smile, while offering the slight scent of the oceans salty splendor. In my mind in color, behind closed eyes I can clearly see my beach, the waves, sand, rocks, all the winged creatures soaring and wind floating on the westerly air currents. I could even hear their calls to each other, and the muted laughter of human children at play. The sight of people's dogs free running the beach and cavorting in the shallow surf. An hour and a half drive each way, taken many times over most of my lifetime, seeking that view and being rewarded by it. Familiar as the faces of my beloved now grown children and nearly as comforting to gaze upon. Yes, I could make the drive, but even that gets harder these days, as most everything does. But why drive it, when all I need do is close my eyes, point my nose up into the breeze and embrace that beach in my still vivid mind's eye, while these technicolor memories last, before they all fade to black.
One of the perks of not actually going to the beach, no need to empty sand out of my shoes or treat a sunburned nose.
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May 20, 2025
May 20, 2025 at 4:38 PM UTC
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