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we are, but the little pebbles nestled in the sand of time's slow flowing river. it is merely, the disparate nature of our minute size in opposition to the immensity of the ponderous river's drift, that creates the grind of pebble, one to another. causing, the eroding of our singular thoughts. it is only the gentle tap-clacking of another's desire to know, and be known. that causes, the acceptence of the rasp and rub of external catechisms. causing, rejuvenation in the questing of kindred souls. that causes the revelation of differing paradigmal, sways and drifts, some sympathetic, some callously indifferent. causing, an ebb and flow of treatise and dissertation. as we abraid and hone each other's sensory disposition, begetting, spectrumunul emotions from elanic bliss to yearning, dolorous sorrow. that causes, introspective despair that grapples against difinitive delight. we the pebbles, caught within this mental current, cannot visualise the infinitesimal alterations wrought by time. yet, others remark upon the changes, that is the way of the waters path, as time flows, unrepentant into the basin of life's sea. we must to survive, simply concede our pretentions and comply to the  power inherit in the water's flow
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Mar 18, 2014
Mar 18, 2014 at 6:13 PM UTC
flow(for depoet, with much grattitude)
we are, but the little pebbles nestled in the sand of time's slow flowing river. it is merely, the disparate nature of our minute size in opposition to the immensity of the ponderous river's drift, that creates the grind of pebble, one to another. causing, the eroding of our singular thoughts. it is only the gentle tap-clacking of another's desire to know, and be known. that causes, the acceptence of the rasp and rub of external catechisms. causing, rejuvenation in the questing of kindred souls. that causes the revelation of differing paradigmal, sways and drifts, some sympathetic, some callously indifferent. causing, an ebb and flow of treatise and dissertation. as we abraid and hone each other's sensory disposition, begetting, spectrumunul emotions from elanic bliss to yearning, dolorous sorrow. that causes, introspective despair that grapples against difinitive delight. we the pebbles, caught within this mental current, cannot visualise the infinitesimal alterations wrought by time. yet, others remark upon the changes, that is the way of the waters path, as time flows, unrepentant into the basin of life's sea. we must to survive, simply concede our pretentions and comply to the  power inherit in the water's flow
I wish to give tjis poem, agian....it is one of mybearlier pieces. ...and was written during a time in which ded poet , wrote and encouraged my writing.....I feel it is a fitting memorial ...to him as a person who struggled with aspects of his life....yet gave of himself in a beautiful and passionate way ... He will be missed.....vale my friend....
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Mar 18, 2014
Mar 18, 2014 at 6:13 PM UTC
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