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I've often been asked The season my heart belongs It’s fall The leaves turn gray Yet their beauty stays true Perhaps because Their beauty means rue The death surrounds us Color’s eminent coup Yet hope remains Despite devil’s due For this dying color Means life will begin anew And life is only beautiful When death receives his due Beauty, Deaths due
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Mar 27, 2014
Mar 27, 2014 at 2:55 PM UTC
Beauty, Deaths Due
I've often been asked The season my heart belongs It’s fall The leaves turn gray Yet their beauty stays true Perhaps because Their beauty means rue The death surrounds us Color’s eminent coup Yet hope remains Despite devil’s due For this dying color Means life will begin anew And life is only beautiful When death receives his due Beauty, Deaths due
First poem I'm posting on here. I'd love any and all criticism as long as it is constructive. Even if mean, I want to improve. Just have it be a thing I can work on, not that it just *****
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Mar 27, 2014
Mar 27, 2014 at 2:55 PM UTC
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